So far so cute! I love the art style, and the characters are so diverse! <3
I did find a small error in the dialogue. Harris says to Venus, "There are things I need to take care and I can't fully focus with your constant note-taking chatter." I believe the OF is missing, as in, "There are things I need to take care of...."
Everything else looked great. I look forward to the full release!
More information in my blog: http://pajamagaming.blogspot.com/2017/01/demos-to-keep-eye-on-1.html